Friday, 8 May 2015

"SHE'S IS ONE OF US"








SHREE -SHE'S ONE OF US




The Start!



I am very much happy to share with you my creation "SHE'S ONE OF US".This story is full of my imagination.

Not everything will go as we expect in our life. Sometimes we need to drop our expectations and go with the flow of life!

In life, things happens for a reason out of our control. Instead of getting down when things don't go right in our life,the only way to thrive in life is to have some positive thoughts and feelings. Everyone will be tested in our life with daunting obstacles not to know our weakness but to know our strength.
Achievements are neither big or small. When exceptional and extraordinary things are at greater heights to get, still we move forward to achieve them and that is "The Great Achievement". Do not regret in life what we don't get. Someday everything will make perfect sense. Keep in Mind, Everything happens for a reason!. Even though the story is about a  girl, every person might have come across such experiences.


Before going into the story I have to describe about My heroine Shree, who is one of us and My Hero Sai. Shree is a girl from a family living in a small town in southern part of Tamilnadu. She is beautiful, joyful, extremely naughty, bold, honest, spiritual, straight forward and outspoken. She still looked beautiful for her values and her character. People easily get jealous of her because they like her so much.

About her family, her father doing small business with which they couldn't make a descent life and her mother,a home maker. She has an elder sister Akhila. Akhila is an Engineering student in her final year. Being a poor girl, her talent and the sponsors are the reasons for her education. Though the Family is an orthodox,they have modern thoughts. Shree's love and affection towards her family cannot not be measured.

Coming to My Hero Sai is a guy who has a neighbor boy look and has a familiar face, that everyone like to mingle with him. He has magnetic eyes. Simple words which defines him is"A kind hearted man who always come forward to help others". He too  doing his engineering final year and  he is a friend of Akhila and a family friend too. He is from an upper middle class family.

My Creation reveals about the problems of Shree which lead to a struggle and how Shree takes that as a success in her life. It also reveals how the situations and experiences in her life makes her to develop her values. Her positive approach towards the life is really amazing. Her Satisfaction in life even when the life is not perfect for her which is even amazing.

Enjoy the story 
Here comes Shree- "SHE'S ONE OF US".


CHAPTER 01:


A STORY BEHIND THE TEARS!!


In the Town,near the Main road,there goes a wide path. It leads to a place with green meadows,lot of trees,a statue in the middle and a temple too. The little breeze made the environment very pleasant. A Peacock dancing and a group of peacocks running here and there. The scene was a great treat to the eyes. The place looked like a big park and the buildings around. It was a wonderful environment. There were some people standing in a queue in one part of the building. The pin drop silence made the place still more beautiful.

But Shree was standing in the queue with a sad face with a file in her hands in front of a room. Tears were just playing hide and seek behind her eyes. Her dressing made her look poor,But still she had a rich look. She was totally down without any hope.

It is 10.am in the morning, the crowd was little disturbed. There came a Lady with the majestic look, neatly dressed, wearing specs, little dark hurried inside the room. Just above the room it was written "The Principal". Yes .. It was a College campus and it was a leading and a popular College of Arts and science for women in the town.

Shree was waiting to get a seat in Science group in the college. The crowd started moving towards the room. Her turn came, she went inside shivering and gave her file to the principal. She started telling some stories to the principal. The principal listened her and said "There is no point in waiting and You can go".

She already felt so depressed and the moment she heard those cruel words from the principal, Her heart broke into pieces but nobody heard the noise. The tears which were playing hide and seek was caught and came out like waterfalls. She felt as if she was detached from her life totally.

In mean while, she overheard some conversation from principal's PA room. The personal assistant was talking to someone who was also waiting for the seat as her. She said "Do not lose Hope. Come Daily. Show your face to the principal and you'll definitely get the seat at least out of sympathy". The words were not just words for Shree. It was like a small drizzle in a desert. She made up her mind and went back to her home in her cycle.

Having scored an extremely very high marks in 12th standard, Why she is standing in the queue for the seat? Why she was begging for a science group seat in an arts and science college when she deserved more than that?? Most of the leading colleges would definitely welcome her for her marks, But why she was standing here with that heavy heart and without any hope. Why she was afraid of her future ? There was a sad story behind her tears!

The only one answer for her standing here was "The Fate".
"The Fate don't ask what we want but know what is the Best"

Lets always hope for the Best!!

Struggle continues ...........

6 comments:

  1. Good start. Suspense in 1st chapter itself .

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  2. Yes...chella...its interesting...I thought she is waiting in a zoo to meet some body...there was a twist..its a collage....and one more was the principal's introduction..explains her attributes..later revealing the character is interesting...ur first few lines remembered me the peacock.which I have shot in my cam...ur vocabs were good... I learnt many words...u keep writing...

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  3. 1.
    Everyone will be tested in our life with daunting obstacles not to know our weakness but to know our strength.
    2. The little breeze made the environment very pleasant. A Peacock dancing and a group of peacocks running here and there. The scene was a great treat to the eyes.
    3. Tears were just playing hide and seek behind her eyes. 
    4. It was like a small drizzle in a desert.

    The above comments touched my heart

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  4. this story looks familiar to me...

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